Award Winning Best Selling Florida Author Yvonne Mason

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This Review is even funnier than the last one- Especially when the author Calls themself “An Aspiring Book Reviewer” Really?


Okay here is another lesson in a person need for their fifteen minutes of fame. They apparently know more about writing and true crime than me. I would love to know where they got their education from.
And they apparently don’t like true crime- have no clue as to what writing true crime is all about and obviously doesn’t understand how it is written. They also have no clue as to why I wrote it the way I did. So once again for the uniformed, the cronically stupid and the just plain idiots let’s try this again. I will break it down in language even a three year old can understand.
This”Aspiring Book Reviewer says “The author has no sense of plot or story telling.” Seriously? You obviously were not reading the same book I wrote- either that or you didn’t read it you just didn’t understand it. There is a story and a plot and it is not badly written. You the reader need to have an understanding of the time period, the criminal justice system and the innocence of that time- Obviously you have none of the above. For your information this book is used all across the country to teach about serial killers. So you are the one with problem.
Next the “Aspiring Book Reviewer states,that is reads like a trial transscript- Really how did you guess, it wa supposed to, it was a big part of the story. No overall structure or sense of story- what planet are you from.
Then this “Aspiring Book Reviewer asks why I ask so many questions? Well – it makes the reader think. Apparently that is a big problem for you. this is not a love story. It is a serial killer.

Now lastly- the “Aspiring Book Reviewer said this is the first book they have ever wanted to stop reading- My response is good- you don’t deserve to remember the girls. You don’t understand what happened nor care. You have no clue as to why the story was told the way it was or the purpose of the story. Obviously you wanted a sweet love story and happily ever after- Real life doesn’t work that way. Serial killers don’t work that way.
When I am told by the victims families thank you for writing this book- I could care less about your aspirations of being an “Aspiring Book Reviewer,” Just a little point of interest if you keep writing idiot reviews like this one you will never make it. Last but not least is sounds a whole lot like the one Mr. Barry Albag wrote almost word for word. Sounds like he is trying to blast my site with his nasy words.
So for all of you who don’t like the facts, don’t understand the facts, don’t understand the criminal justice system especially at a time when Serial Killing was in its infancy- want a watered down version of what happened, have no intention of remembering the victims and those who were involved in these horrific crimes then don’t read this book- The victims don’t need you. For those of you who want to know what happened and why- want to know the facts and how the case was solved and the mechanics behind it want to remember the girls then read this book- If you want to know the history of serial killing in Florida and how it was handled read this book. As for this insane review- Consider the source.
“Not only was this book badly written, but the author has no sense of plot or story telling skill. It reads like a trial transcript: he said…, she then said…, then the judge ordered… There is no overall structure or sense of story. However most annoying was the rhetorical questions asked ad nauseum throughout. Does the author not know any other plot device? This is the first book that I have considered to STOP reading, so that I can find a better book about the killer Shaefer and his horrible yet fascinating life. Don’t waste time or money on this book.”
by Aspiring Book Reviewer – See all my reviews

October 23, 2011 - Posted by | Reviews | , , , , , ,

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